Hortatory (School Hours Should be Made Shorter)

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Topic : School Hours

Thesis : Clear topic : School hours should be made shorter

Position : pro

Outline : 1. School makes students to be bored and don’t spirit to study

2. Longer school hours doesn’t guarantee the quality of students's intellectual

Argument : 1. Increasing age, people consentration is decreases because bored especially for them who do activitiy which do for many years, for example attend school

2. People’s activity make break decreases, and make someone to be sick.

Recommendation : So, students aren’t bored because longer school hours, and student don’t skip school.

School Hours Should be Made Shorter

I think, school hours should be made shorter, because it makes students to be bored and don’t spirit to study. Longer school hours doesn’t guarantee the quality of students's intellectual

Firstly, Increasing age, people consentration is decreases because bored especially for them who do activitiy which do for many years, for example attend school. We attand school since 4-5 years old, and when we are mature, we will bored, especially longer school hours.

Secondly, every body have activity, for example, courses, extracullicular, working group, etc. It make break decreases, and make someone to be sick.

Education of Indonesia can be succes if education department consider school hours should be made shorter. So, students aren’t bored because longer school hours, and student don’t skip school.