Sunday 1 May 2011

Hortatory (Equal Treatment between Man and Woman)

Heheheh, maaf ya grammar saya jelek bgt. Jadi kalo mau baca harap di maklum, kalo mau ngopas baca lagi deh

Topic : Emancipation

Thesis : Clear topic : Equal Treatment between man and woman

Position : pro

Outline : 1. woman entitled to same treatment as man

2. Women are to be valued and respected

Argument : 1. in the book “Door Duisternis tot Licht”, Kartini describe woman of Java suffering result traditional confines, that is secluded, married to man who are not familiar, and willing polygamy.

2. UUD 1945 article 27 paragraph 2

3. UUD 1945 article 28

Recommendation : Therefore, Woman can not be underestimated and woman entitled to same treatment as man.

Equal Treatment between Man and Woman

I Think, emancipation for woman is very important, because woman entitled to same treatment as man. Woman are to be valued and respected. Woman not just a servant in charge of household, but women intitled to get education.

Firstly, in the book “Door Duisternis tot Licht”, Kartini describe woman of Java suffering result traditional confines, that is secluded, married to man who are not familiar, and willing polygamy. For Kartini, It is complete suffering for woman of Java, their life are restricted wall’s house. For example, Kartini is only allowed attend school until 12 years old in the ELS (Europe Lagere School) and she must live in her house because she had secluded

Secondly, in UUD 1945 article 27 paragraph 2 is mentioned “Every citizen has the right to decent work and livehood for humanity”. Moreover, in UUD 1945 article 28 is mentioned “"Freedom of association, assembly, out of mind with the spoken, written, and so determined by law "

Woman has capabilities are not much different from man. Woman also have talents, and interest can be channeled and developed. Therefore, Woman can not be underestimated and woman entitled to same treatment as man.

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